Halo Fans of Mine? Or any fan of mine.

I'm working on a halo fic that's been slowly clawing at my mind for the past two-three weeks and has been calling or rather crying 'Sahra write me~ WRITE ME~!' so I am. Want a preview? Well I don't care if you do or don't here's the summary then a quote or two from what I've got done.

They were bought as children,
Their life no longer barren.

As they grew in age,
Life's books turned a page.

No one would assume,
That one girl was taken from the womb.

The man who would become her mate,
She was his Echo; it was her fate.

1)  "the Spartans will grow older. They will want to become physical. Rather than risking them knocking up a marine or each other, they will have the Conceivers. Male Conceivers will be fertile so that the Female Spartans will not be rendered useless, unless you'd rather risk them having intercourse with Marines and there be a risk of birth." ~Dr. Halsey on what the Concievers are for.

2) "I get to meet him after though?" She asked and looked up at Halsey. Halsey nodded and felt a tug at her heart, oh how she hated to lie to this girl. ~Conceiver-117 talking to Halsey, Halsey's personal guilt thoughts.

3) "I have a name!" The young girl at only eleven yelled. Her eyes were bright with unshed and angry tears. She hated being called that. Conceiver. couldn't they call her by the name they had given her? ~Conceiver-117

4) "Actually, Spartan-117 has been waiting for this day. He's wanted to see you. Even meet you." Halsey saw Echo's eyes light up and the pace picked up. "John's wanted to meet you for a long time." ~Dr. Halsey to Conciever-117

5) "Conceiver-117!" The female scientist yelled. The girl was once again disobeying and not responding to her number. How was she to be a leader if she was like this! "Conceiv-" ~Scientist that is against program

6) "The Conceivers are to be partners to Spartans. As children you'll be friends, as teens you'll be closer than friends, and as adults you'll be lovers. These Conceivers will not be like you Spartans. They are there only for the Spartans. To be friends and soon you'll understand what I mean by all of this. But you saved that child the woman is carrying. I saw you watching, and because the child is a female, she'll be yours." ~Dr. Halsey to young Spartan-117